I am a student at Goldfields primary. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note.... some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.

Thursday, 8 August 2019

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Cross country

I heard Mr Miller yelling Go, and we were off. I saw people passing me at the start of the race. I felt the wind blowing against my face. Further along the track, I heard somebody jogging behind me, they soon passed me and I didn't see who it was. I saw the race leader about fifty metres in front of me, with second place forty metres and third place only thirty metres away. I wonder what place I'll come this year. Closer and closer to the finish line we get. A minute or two later we leap over the ditch,
jog through the trees, jump over the balancing beam and sprint to the finish line coming sixth with Alexia in seventh.

Monday, 19 November 2018

My Emoji Story

Once upon a time there was a penguin that ate an ice cream and then a woman got a massage from one of the zookeepers.In a couple of days that woman was going to have a baby. Finally the day came and she had to go in an ambulance to the hospital, soon she got to go home to her house with the red door. In a few years she had to go on a train because she wanted to go on holiday. On the way to the train station she stopped at her sisters farm to buy some apples, to eat on the train. When she got to the hotel it was 10 pm, so she went straight to bed. During the night she woke up and saw a ghost. That morning she had pizza for breakfast, then she went to the zoo and saw whale. Then she had to go to the toilet and after, she went to the snake room and saw a mouse so she got very unhappy so she asked if she could put up a no biking sign and that was a couple of years after she had the baby witch was a boy. Soon she had to go back home so she could go to the fair and see the magician. after she went to the fair she went home and picked up her son so she could teach him how to 
These are the emojis that I am making the story from

Thursday, 25 October 2018

My walk at Nanas

"I'm going for a walk now Nana." I said as I put my socks on. Two minutes later, I was walking up the concrete towards the gate, that leads up to the hill. I'm going to go around to the tank first. Then I'll go and see if there's a way to get into the gorse." Crunch! Crunch! Crunch! went the sticks as I walked over them.

Covid-19 Recount

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